Correction of the essay

Correction of the essay
In my essay most of my mistake was about: the contraction of some world and mistake of plural. I wrote a lot of world like: wasn’t, didn’t and others. And I was supposed to put: did not, was not.

I said “researches”, this is wrong because you cannot count “research”. So i should have said research.

I said “witness said” and this is wrong because there is more than one witness. I should have said witnesses said.

I said “parallels”, this is wrong because it not plural. I should have said parallel.

I said “proofs”, it wrong because you cannot count the proof. I should have said “many prove”.

Par:3 (...) And when the police arrived to Marilyn’s place they didn’t find any needle or anything that it can be used to do this. They didn’t find anything to prove she did it to herself. This is why people think that there was someone with her that night.

Par:4 During all those years, we never found who really killed her but we have a lot of suspects. In fact we know she didn’t kill herself with medication because they didn’t find anything to prove she had needles or even a glass of water. And her body was not at the same place when we find her. Many things linked the Kennedy’s to the murder like the red carnet which disappeared. There are still many prove to find.